Please correct my Italian sentence.

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>>> "ciao my friend who is the connoisseur of wine."

"Ciao, amico mio intenditore di vino/vini"

or

"Ciao al mio amico intenditore di vino/vini"

You don't need to translate "who", but if you want to, it's "che", not "a chi".

Honestly, whatever translation of the first part is really weird, in Italian, unless you change the sentence a bit:

" Ciao, intenditore di vino/vini! ;) "

Now it's ok. I removed "amico", but it's implied. ;)

"Conoscitore" is ok, but "Intenditore" is better. ;)

>>> "All is good here in America"

"Tutto bene qui in America"

You must use "in" (not "a") when you talk about nations. And the article is not needed.

BTW, note that " a " + " l' " = " all' ".

>>> "All is ok with you, is it?"

"Tu, tutto a posto?"

That's a very colloquial expression.

>>> NO ENGLISH HERE

Just say "Un bacione". ;)

"Bacione" is like "Big kiss", so you can omit "Grande", unless you want to exaggerate on purpose.

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If you say "Tu, tutto a posto?", "Come stai?" is not needed. To use both expressions, you can rearrange the words.:

"Tu come stai? Tutto a posto?"

Here, "Tu" can't be omitted.

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grazie mille :)

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Prego :)

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Can I add "come stai" like I did here? Ciao, intenditore di vini! Tutto bene qui in America. Come stai? Tu, tutto a posto. Un Bacione.
Grazie Sal